My Dream Car

My dream car is the Lexus SUV in red of course. I want my car in red because I think red is beautiful on cars because it stands out a lot. I really like the lexus because I like fancy cars. This car looks beautiful on the outside but this car is even better in the inside. The lexus has very comfortable seats with seat heaters, and I really like how the heater works like one side can be cold and the other side can be worm. I mostly like the heater part because I'm always really cold. And my favorite part is the navigation system my aunt has it in her car and we get lost all the time so its just perfect for me because I know I will get lost a lot.

My Favorite Show

My favorite show to watch on TV is Degrassi. Its a really interesting show. I started watching it about four years ago when i saw my cousin watching it. I really liked the show so I started watching it a lot. I like it because it's about all the things teens go through in high school and just being a teenager. It talks about things like teen pregnancy, how gay kids gets treated in school, date rapes,dealing with the loss of a friend, peer pressure, trying drugs, and a lot more things that may happen to teens. It's really good for teens to watch because sometimes it shows how you could handle things in a situation like that one.

A Woman Plans To Stop Library From Having An Inappropriate Book

A woman plans to burn cartoon books from the school library.She thinks that the cartoon book are not appropriate. I don't think that she should try and make that school not have the book just because she thinks its not appropriate. My opinion is every ones children are raised different so other parents might not have the same opinion as she does. So they should just band them form checking out books.

Peer Editing

*Step 1 - Compilents

1. Start positive and stay positive
2. Always start with compliments

• I really love your topic
• I think you used a lot of good details
• I think when you used the word
• My favorite part was....because
• This was really fun to read because..
• I liked the way you...

*Step 2 - Suggestions

1. Be specific!
2. Give details

*Step 3 - Corrections

• Spelling mistakes
• Sentence mistakes
• Punctuation mistakes

How I Got Locked Out Of My House

One day me and my friends road the bus to my house. We didn't think to call on the way there so when we got there nobody was there. I then called my mom to see where she was at and she was in Portland and we had no way to contact my brothers. So we had to sit out side for about two hours when it was freezing and on top of that we were really hungry. So now I understand that I need to call before I just go home to make sure I can even get in.

Story Ideas

* What was the best nick name you have made up for a friend
* Did you ever become friends with someone much older or much younger than me
* Did you mom or dad ever make you wear something you hated
* Write about wearing high heels for the first time
* Write about going back to school after summer vacation
* What is the worst punishment your parents can use on you? would you use it on you children
* Explain what life must have been like before the invention of electricity
* Tell about the time you accidentally locked your self outside
* Tell about the happiest you have ever been
* A town with a new law no music
* A human who meets big foot
* Kids who get caught in a time wrap and find themselves in the past
* Someone who got lost in a mall for thirty years
* Write a persuasive essay about why you would,or would not like to have a twin
* What you consider can be the best or worst job
* A story about the best are worst neighbor you ever had

Technology

The kinds of technology I use everyday are my Ipod, my cellphone, computers, microwave, radio, television, and many other thing you use daily.My favorite thing to use daily is my cell phone, my Ipod, and computers. I always like to keep in touch with people and always converse with people and I also like to listen to my music all day. I always have to listen to music and I listen to it on my free time. My life would be really different without them because I use technology every single day, like every single second. I really couldn't be without my cell phone. It would be different without my cellphone because I wouldn't get anything done without it. I don't know what I would do without television. I watch television everyday.

my first blog

I feel like the whole bloging process is a pretty good idea just to explors others work as well as yours.